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"Burn it all" by ~Oblivion666:iconOblivion666:

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Sam Girvan

"Burn it all"

Breathing life into you
Making you black and blue
Hurting you with crimes of passion
Time to realise this attraction.

Hiding in this mass of dark
Wake up to the face of art
Powerful words come from the night
Filling you with pain and fright.

Not understanding those that love you
Understanding those that hate you
This is your time
Tell them the rhyme.

Burn it all
Stall it all
Suspend the time
Burn the rhyme.

Filling the glass with water
Losing love like a daughter
Whisper to yourself
Show yourself
All the pain you've held in.

It's not the time for you to go
Keep it up
Destroy the flow
It's not the time for you to go
The world is there for you to show.

Tremble on the floor
Cry those tears for them
Like you think they care
Your so moronic

Burn it all
Stall it all
Suspend the time
Burn the rhyme.
©2006-2008 ~Oblivion666
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Submitted: April 10, 2006
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Another poem i wrote up on the spure of ze momento!
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~Dutch-Assassin:iconDutch-Assassin: Apr 12, 2006, 1:42:43 AM
wow now that is brilliant well done will fav it

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
~Oblivion666:iconOblivion666: Apr 12, 2006, 2:53:24 AM
Heh, thanks man.

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~Dutch-Assassin:iconDutch-Assassin: Apr 12, 2006, 7:01:09 AM
:D no problem keep it up

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
~indigomists:iconindigomists: Apr 14, 2006, 7:24:40 AM
Beautyful and lovely, filles my heart with sugary pastel goodness,

Well, not exactly, But I love it anyway!!!

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The rain can't hurt me now,This rain will wash away what's passed
-quote from Les Misarables
~Krying-Krimson-Tears:iconKrying-Krimson-Tears: Apr 15, 2006, 11:33:43 AM
A slight new angle my love? But I'm still loveing it :hug:

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~Oblivion666:iconOblivion666: Apr 15, 2006, 2:08:26 PM
Yeah i've noticed my poems are taking a slightly darker side as of late, but its coming out pretty good.

I'm glad you like it babe.

I love you xxx

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~Oblivion666:iconOblivion666: Apr 15, 2006, 2:09:08 PM
Hah!

Well i'm glad it can be cool in some way! =P

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~Krying-Krimson-Tears:iconKrying-Krimson-Tears: Apr 16, 2006, 3:54:44 AM
Mmm maybe it's my naughty influence lol :censored: or the dark poems you read of mine, there were many lol.

Well yea they are good so keep them coming my love :date: love you xxxx

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~Oblivion666:iconOblivion666: Apr 16, 2006, 5:47:05 AM
I will ^_^
Love you too xxx

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